the muse
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23. THE MUSE---DR.KGB
O my sanctum muse,
The Invisible,
The Form formless,
You dawns in me,
Dawn-dusk-dawn,
Ding-dong-ding,
The Presence Imminent;
The Non-spelled;
TheHue, the Beat;
The Tingling Breath!
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12-4-2012
O my sanctum muse,
The Invisible,
The Form formless,
You dawns in me,
Dawn-dusk-dawn,
Ding-dong-ding,
The Presence Imminent;
The Non-spelled;
TheHue, the Beat;
The Tingling Breath!
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12-4-2012
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Poetry.com 4 out of 5 based on 8 votes.
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i love this (:
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good job. i like it.
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Nice poem.
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I like it.
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I noticed a few minor grammatical errors, but I assume you are a Ph.D. in literature from a country where English is not the native language, so that's understandable. Nice work.
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I suppose it is just to simple to say that this is supposed to be read aloud, but then we ignore what is before our nose at peril. I really like the quickness of pace and clever alliteration. The first line is the only one here that feels a little damp. I think this is only because it seems to be telling us to find some depth. The rest of the work relies on imagery and is simple to a very happy end. I enjoyed reading this, thank you.
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Too confusing
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