Immortal feelings in mortal words.
by
Peter Kiggin
Immortal feelings in mortal words.
Blood rushes through these mortal veins and generous vibrant flashes of sweet serenity surrounds me as waves flowing through the air humming and sparkling deep blues and yellows,
crashing into your eyes and ear drums to make a symphony of such configurations that it touches every brain cell which starts a chemical and physical reaction,
what can only be described as electricity being produced that flows through the blood of this simple mortal man.
Blood rushes through these mortal veins and generous vibrant flashes of sweet serenity surrounds me as waves flowing through the air humming and sparkling deep blues and yellows,
crashing into your eyes and ear drums to make a symphony of such configurations that it touches every brain cell which starts a chemical and physical reaction,
what can only be described as electricity being produced that flows through the blood of this simple mortal man.
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Poetry.com 3.3 out of 5 based on 6 votes.
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Nice poem
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We sometimes have to step outside our boxes and look at things in another way.
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ok
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deep
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I like this poem, but not enough, since the long, long sentences distract me from your message. I think if you break it up a little, you can punch each point and add power to your work. JMHO. Good luck!! :)
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It needs a revision as I need more.
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