Not easy
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It is not easy to make
Yourself changed
It is easy to see the
Mirror though .
Study situation is not easy
You fell prey
Of the situation though .
Yourself changed
It is easy to see the
Mirror though .
Study situation is not easy
You fell prey
Of the situation though .
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Poetry.com 3.8 out of 5 based on 5 votes.
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Truthful words
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I know exactly what you're saying - and that's important! Now it's just a matter of making a few minor changes to earn it 5*****s from me. First of all, the two 'though's don't work for me. I think you should get rid of at least one of them. 'Though' is one of those tricky words that is best used in moderation (as I have discovered in my own work.) I would also like to see this end as a complete sentence - but that's JMHO. I'm not crazy about fragments, especially when I use them! Good work! :)
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i like the ideas contained!
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it was alright
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tfs
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