Down and Down
by
Dale Raymond
down and down I go
depression
no hope that anything will change
a groan of silence
a trap in a void
life that is not living
an attempt to escape
if not sucessful
depression will return
descending into apathy
at bottom
no desire for anything
swallowed by eternity
depression
no hope that anything will change
a groan of silence
a trap in a void
life that is not living
an attempt to escape
if not sucessful
depression will return
descending into apathy
at bottom
no desire for anything
swallowed by eternity
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Poetry.com 4.3 out of 5 based on 16 votes.
really enjoyed this
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jst kill the time......happiness will come.......REAL PIECE
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In darkness alone. Heartfelt
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Well thought out and written down
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I have looked through your eyes
i have walked in your shoes
There is a light after the darkness
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great explanation of illness
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Great
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My friend , welcome to the club !! I know wery well this filling . But we must push our self up every day !
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very emotional
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well written
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Well expressed
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This is about as well as depression can be expressed, especially while your suffering from it yourself. But this too shall pass. Keep up the good work!
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exact sense of emotion
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I only wish you could of wrote more i liked it though
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May Allah protect us all from depression.
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nice
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