Gates to the Fades Of Eternal Peace
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The Dwelling Cold, Touching My Skin
As the Fades Begin's to Fade
Your Memories Of Life are passing threw My Eyes
Joy and Sorrow
My Anguish of Not seeing you no more
It's just the Life Stream We dwell
Caring your good times inside my heart
For We defeated the Chaos withing
Now move on my beloved Friend
For The time for you to rest will soon begin
Until we meet again in your destiny of Life
My Dear Brother of Mine
Closing the gates I turned and wait for the next Sending of the Fades
For this Battle hasn't had an End or will it?
As the Fades Begin's to Fade
Your Memories Of Life are passing threw My Eyes
Joy and Sorrow
My Anguish of Not seeing you no more
It's just the Life Stream We dwell
Caring your good times inside my heart
For We defeated the Chaos withing
Now move on my beloved Friend
For The time for you to rest will soon begin
Until we meet again in your destiny of Life
My Dear Brother of Mine
Closing the gates I turned and wait for the next Sending of the Fades
For this Battle hasn't had an End or will it?
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Some deep inside my Being.. I now its true beyond my knowing of things..so far
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Poetry.com 4.2 out of 5 based on 47 votes.
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its a nice poem about life and emotion and family to me
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The choice of words, the flow of the poem, the strength of the emotion given to the poem... They were all able to reach me as a reader. A bit painful and heartbreaking to read... Losing someone in a hopes of being reunited again... Facing a challenge that may never end...
P.S. I think this will be a great addition to an anime fan-fic ^_^
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great emotion well written
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I liked the description of how you feel the loss. Well done.
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wow caught my interest very very good
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Very nice! i like this,
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good feel
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Very good job!
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Your words really moved me....I have had many losses and know the intense pain you feel.
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noble poem
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Great poem
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Great job
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I feel the force that's with you
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can you help me move up to the top ten with some advice maybe
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A finely worked out poem!
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This was a very well written work. It is easy to hear the emotions in the poets words. Well done.
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A really nice poem
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you did a very good job ^_^
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well written, touching piece love the line.its just the life stream we dwell.
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Very nice word used in a very special way. Nice writing all the way through.
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Great! And considering English isn't your first language...!
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well done!
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just like all your other poems, this one is simply stunning
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it made contemplate deeply the ? is there...
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nicely written. struggles of life and love. nice flow
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