Monarch -- Haiku
by
Asim Nehal
Long wait for masses. How painful!
Just for one glimpse that to from far distance
Are you moon or monarch?
About this poem : Dedicated to all of them who wish to rule this world by keeping distance from the masses. Also to all of them, who promise to fulfil things and then retract like moon ....
Just for one glimpse that to from far distance
Are you moon or monarch?
About this poem : Dedicated to all of them who wish to rule this world by keeping distance from the masses. Also to all of them, who promise to fulfil things and then retract like moon ....
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Poetry.com 3 out of 5 based on 6 votes.
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The poet describes the opacity created by the distance rather gulf between a particular person or a group of people which in many cases could be intentional.
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ok
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poems of three lines
are not necessarily
what haiku defines
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I don't get it.
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stick to the format
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Haikus have rules
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