The Rain
by
Doina Mican
Rain comes,
Hasty, jittery,
To wash away the noise
And the souls,
The smell of food,
And that of gasoline;
To wash away the wrongs,
And regrets.
Rain falls in a hurry,
Weaving a watery linen,
Chilling the sky,
And the groggy city;
The doleful faces,
With bitter smiles.
Copyright Doina M. Mican
Hasty, jittery,
To wash away the noise
And the souls,
The smell of food,
And that of gasoline;
To wash away the wrongs,
And regrets.
Rain falls in a hurry,
Weaving a watery linen,
Chilling the sky,
And the groggy city;
The doleful faces,
With bitter smiles.
Copyright Doina M. Mican
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Nicely worded. ..made me smile :)
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I've tried to review this poem 5 times
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reviews are not getting posted again - so frustrating 10stars Doina
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Poetry.com 4.7 out of 5 based on 126 votes.
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Cool one!
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:)
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Thanks for sharing this one!!
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yes!
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Because its raining where I'm at.
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My car needs a wash
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Gotta love the rain
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Great
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Well done
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I love the images that I can see and smell in your poem. I can see the rain sweeping through and washing away the wrongs!
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well done
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Great one
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Like it!!
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Beautiful.
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im not overexhadurating...i felt something special wen i read this poem! i felt as if my mind was cleared out and sunk into this poem and i felt as if i had left my body for a moment
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your work is amazing...simply amazing...I truly love your style and grace
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Without rain life wouldn't exist.
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I can feel the rain
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;-)
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It reminded me a little of some lines from Travis Bickle in Taxi Driver...'Some day a real rain will come down and wash all the trash off the side walk'' or something like that. This I enjoyed anyway, the power of rain :)
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thank you for sharing this poem. =)
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What a picture here - felt =) wash the world and cringe at the cold =) ((Hugs)) Kat
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magnifique
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nice poem
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love it
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