the query
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THE QUERY----DR.K.G.BALAKRISHNAN
Would you sing?
, The road side tree,
The great grand father,
The very tune half-hum
By the Bird!
When asleep was the earth,
The very night-song of the stars
That sought the ding-dong,
The blossom an’ the wither,
The semi-sung rhyme,
That does haunt the inmost in
As the seizures spontaneous!
The Hymn chanted,
Of the True, the Unseen,
The unknowable figureless;
Of the micro-moment that
Dissolves into the mute Fullness
-Your celestial solemn somnolence.
The Wayfarer would come
This very route with one thousand
Queries before you, the great Rishi!
Could you ever answer him?
Rather analyze the Axiom!
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23-11-11
Note- the ding dong = the start & the end
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Poetry.com 4 out of 5 based on 10 votes.
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my favorite of your work that I have read so far. (and I have read a lot lol).
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Alot of people are criticizing you, sometimes i see ypu don´t review my work often which angers me but you are a real poet and your full of truths that I think are wonderful.
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Thanks for sharing!
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Really nice poem :) I really like it :)
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Nice reading.
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I have to admit this is one of your best poems I've read yet - I can see the culture coming through these lines! The only line thats throwing me off is:
As the seizures spontaneous!
I may have worded this line diferently, or it may be missing a word, can't put my finger on it.
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and Nice.........? alpha and omega .
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good ,but liitle bit more clear in direction
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I enjoyed the subject matter but i didn't like the way the words were put together in some spots.
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I do not understand the contents of this poem.
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