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IF YOU LOVE ME……..

IF YOU LOVE ME……..
 
If you love me
I will give you my soul,
If you love me
You will become my goal.
 
If you love me
Will become blind
And see through your eye
And will never cry,
 
If you love me
Will become you tongue
Will sing your song
Will never bother the throng,
 
If you love me
I will become your heart
Will beat rhythmically pleasurably
Will absorb all the pain absurd,
 
If you love me
Will become your mind
Will take all your depressions
Never put you on hind,
 
If you love me
I will become your body
Will dance with melody
Never let fall any tragedy,
 
If you love me
I will become you
A duty full crew
Take you to the skies
No clouds no dew,
 
Even death comes
It will be me
Never you, never you
If you love me
I will leave heavens for you…..
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Poetry.com 2.9 out of 5 based on 7 votes.
Sharmila Ramesh More than 1 year ago
but you could have made it more perfect with word usage.....keep writing
jessica Menley More than 1 year ago
i love this poem !
Michael Frazier More than 1 year ago
Very well done, best by this writer that I have read.
Jenny Ali More than 1 year ago
needs better wording & strucure...............typos.....( I think you meant "your tongue" )...........etc., etc.,
William Wold More than 1 year ago
JUST OK NEEDS WORDING
Divya Nishant Ranote More than 1 year ago
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drkgbalakrishna More than 1 year ago
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