Never Free

You got straight to the point with this. Terrie

sort and too the point loved it

cool

Dont let ppl hate on this it's sounding like someone's having problems though..

I can feel every single word, and I think we've all been there.

Short, to the point. I can feel the pain. Very well said!

i'd love to hear it set against music!

This is a great poem but you should have taken the time to reword it.

Explains what I'm going through!!

The run for romance is never strewn with rose petals.More the stone corners we combat more its sweet finally.

been there felt it

I like the rhymes and the words are well chosen.

I like how the poem gathers a bundle of conflicting feelings into simple verses. The voice of the poem seems interesting because it sounds like they are the very reason for being unable to be free (the reason being their own love for the "you" in the poem). I personally think this poem could be improved or enhanced, as it kind of draws the reader before quickly coming to a conclusion. I believe this poem is more deep than the provided lines, but this is just my opinion. I enjoyed reading this poem.

painful to read

Its alright

It has a hackneyed theme.

poorly written