Remain at the Gate
by
Doina Mican
Remain at the Gate
I am,
From another world,
Delayed but for an instant,
To lose myself into pleasure,
And easily slither,
Into oblivion!
Do not think,
That I am alive!
For you,
I am amazingly dead.
I am no longer,
From your world!
Therefor I request,
That you shall remain at the gate!
I can hear you.
You wish to retain me.
Probably to love me,
Even to understand me.
It would all be great,
But it’s too late,
Because for you,
I am already dead.
The French version is below (at the request of Poets that can read in the French language)
Restez-Vous a la porte
Je suis
D’un autre monde
Atardee un instant.
Je m’oublie a plaisir
Pour mieux glisser
Dans le neant.
Ne croyez pas
Que je suis vivante.
Pour vous
Je suis merveilleusement mort.
Je ne suis plus
De votre monde,
S’il vous plait
Restez-vouz a la porte!
Je vous entends.
Vous voulez me retenir
M’aimer peut-etre
Aussi me comprendre.
Tout cella pourrait etre bon
Mais c’est trop tard
Car pour vous
Je suis deja morte !
Copyright Doina M. Mican
6-06-2012
I am,
From another world,
Delayed but for an instant,
To lose myself into pleasure,
And easily slither,
Into oblivion!
Do not think,
That I am alive!
For you,
I am amazingly dead.
I am no longer,
From your world!
Therefor I request,
That you shall remain at the gate!
I can hear you.
You wish to retain me.
Probably to love me,
Even to understand me.
It would all be great,
But it’s too late,
Because for you,
I am already dead.
The French version is below (at the request of Poets that can read in the French language)
Restez-Vous a la porte
Je suis
D’un autre monde
Atardee un instant.
Je m’oublie a plaisir
Pour mieux glisser
Dans le neant.
Ne croyez pas
Que je suis vivante.
Pour vous
Je suis merveilleusement mort.
Je ne suis plus
De votre monde,
S’il vous plait
Restez-vouz a la porte!
Je vous entends.
Vous voulez me retenir
M’aimer peut-etre
Aussi me comprendre.
Tout cella pourrait etre bon
Mais c’est trop tard
Car pour vous
Je suis deja morte !
Copyright Doina M. Mican
6-06-2012
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This is this site's best piece....................even this is the best piece ever produced by any poet
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This poem is about people that have disappointed me through the years who unfortunately left a bitter taste in my mouth.
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Poetry.com 4.8 out of 5 based on 111 votes.
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Cool poem
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Very good stuff!
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Very cordial
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Sweet
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thank you!
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Poem
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beautiful poem
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Keep it up
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Truly beautiful - one not to remain at the gate!
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Very great one Doina
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One of the best!
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Keep it up.
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Excellent poem!
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powerful
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very good
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Nice. I loved it.
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Excellent poem!!!!
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it is how I feel all the time.
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