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A Dog and 17 Baby Goats

Newborn baby goats are pure delight;
They jump and play all day and all night.
It is their way to say
everything in the world is all right.

Seventeen of them born the last two weeks this Spring,
Each one of them the cutest little thing;
Joy to my heart
is what thoughts of them bring.

Does the goat herder write a poem about this?
No, the baby goats are a complete miss;
He writes about how eating the after birth
gives his dog pure bliss.

Copyright (c) 2012 Dale Raymond 6-16-12
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Poetry.com 4.3 out of 5 based on 20 votes.
Aaron Crisp 9 months ago
very well written and very clever and witty
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
I love it
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
Gabriel, Thank you. Your review means a lot to me. You have so much talent yourself.
Liam Godfrey More than 1 year ago
I had a giggle.
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
Liam, Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Ludy Bührs More than 1 year ago
well done!
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
Ludy, Thank you. Your comments mean a lot to me. You are such a talented and accomplished poetess yourself. If only the web site would quit deleting your poems!
Rob Cull More than 1 year ago
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Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
Rob, thank you.
Monica Harley More than 1 year ago
I love it!
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
Monica, Thank you. I appreciate your comment.
george More than 1 year ago
I did write one but it was a 'hard labor' (unfinished)
george More than 1 year ago
goat 'hearder' ~ interesting
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
:) "hearder" was a typo. I fixed it.
george More than 1 year ago
not goat hearer?
Vagharsh Kandilian More than 1 year ago
i love it !
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
Vagharsh, Thank you!
Vincent Botting More than 1 year ago
I love this , you have made me smile loads :)
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
Vincent, thank you. I am glad you see the humor.
doina More than 1 year ago
Oh, my God, i love it !
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
Doina, Thank you. I am glad you see the humor, and, I hope, the irony.
Bob Coutts More than 1 year ago
You have taken me to a place I would never have been. A place I'd like to go again. Thanks for the visit.
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
Bob, thank you. I am glad that you enjoyed the poem.
Farmer Jackie More than 1 year ago
so natural...
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
Thank you.
Justice Davis More than 1 year ago
:) lots of smiles
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
Justice, Thank you. I am glad that you see the humor.
Beverly Tilley More than 1 year ago
nature at work
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
Beverly, Thank you.
Xavier Paolo Josh Ledesma Mandreza More than 1 year ago
seriously, sir - we all know this poem is yours. love it and the copyright too...
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
I am obsessive compulsive about copyrights. You never know. Better safe than sorry.
Susan Sharpe 10 months ago
Started really nice but the end of a little gross.
Larry Stallings More than 1 year ago
weak ending
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
Larry, thank you for your review.
Dolly von der Reith More than 1 year ago
...please add one more stanza to complete this poem...
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
ok. I will think of a stanza or something for you. Too often, I don't quit at the end, and an additional stanza weakens it.
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
Here it goes, but I think it is better left implied rather that explicitly said: Secrets are hidden in these wonderful days. We can become too familiar with nature's miraculous ways, And become unable to listen to the important things that nature says.
Rojith Joseph More than 1 year ago
very good poem.It is an inspiration to others.
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
Rojith, Thank you.
Emily More than 1 year ago
i wish this was closer to heart iget it but it has no wow factor
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
Thank you. I could have made it stronger, but I wanted to keep it decent.
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