Drunk Pup
by
Caleb Smith
I once had a dog who took him a shot
Of my brown whiskey...he liked it a lot
And when he woke up
My young drunken pup
He gave back the drink he'd got
*Limerick--Caleb Smith
Of my brown whiskey...he liked it a lot
And when he woke up
My young drunken pup
He gave back the drink he'd got
*Limerick--Caleb Smith
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Poetry.com 4.4 out of 5 based on 10 votes.
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good laugh and good rhyme
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Mr. Smith your you just keep out doing yourself.Well done
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What a pleasant surprise to see the limerick form used.
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well i can only imagine.
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love it
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Soooooooooo funny :) Made me laugh too much :D
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You keep 'em coming
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the rhythm does seem slightly off though...might flow better with one or two less syllables in the first two lines
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It is Missing Something
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I'm surprised you managed to get a dog to drink whiskey.
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