YOUR SMILE KEEPS ME ALIVE
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I told you.....I like water...
..not only to drink...
but it doesn't mean...I can swim ...
why did you leave me in the middle of the sea!
Is it because.....I am like water....
to accept all your faults!
I told you....I like breeze...
...not only to feel...
but It doesn't mean....I can alone stand...
why did you leave me in the middle of the wind!
Is it because...I am like breeze...
to pass away all your regrets!
I told you.... I like your smile...
...not only to watch..
but it doesn't mean...I can still stare...
why did you leave me smiling as if you don't care!
Is it because....I am like smile ...
to hide grief that life brings!
I told you ...I like to be your friend...
....not only to share...
but ...It doesn't mean...I can take heartache to spare...
why did you leave my heart in pain that I can't bare!
Is it because..I am like a friend...
to accept...forgive and forget every thing!
....May be...
......You know in your Heart that......
My heart rejoices to await in life still....
....'For You'.....
As my love always remain unchangeable in my will.
..not only to drink...
but it doesn't mean...I can swim ...
why did you leave me in the middle of the sea!
Is it because.....I am like water....
to accept all your faults!
I told you....I like breeze...
...not only to feel...
but It doesn't mean....I can alone stand...
why did you leave me in the middle of the wind!
Is it because...I am like breeze...
to pass away all your regrets!
I told you.... I like your smile...
...not only to watch..
but it doesn't mean...I can still stare...
why did you leave me smiling as if you don't care!
Is it because....I am like smile ...
to hide grief that life brings!
I told you ...I like to be your friend...
....not only to share...
but ...It doesn't mean...I can take heartache to spare...
why did you leave my heart in pain that I can't bare!
Is it because..I am like a friend...
to accept...forgive and forget every thing!
....May be...
......You know in your Heart that......
My heart rejoices to await in life still....
....'For You'.....
As my love always remain unchangeable in my will.
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Poetry.com 4.9 out of 5 based on 12 votes.
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loved it completely
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You weave a beautiful poem that pulls the reader into the emotions and questions it creates. Well done.
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good
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love it
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Love this one Hazel...very well written! Thanks for sharing!
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it made me smile.
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What a great pleasure to see Beauty and Talent magically blended in this touching and well crafted write, dear Hazel! I hope many would your amazing poems and a get a positive incentive in all of them! Thank you for sharing and keep inspiring the World with of your poignant writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!
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Very well written.
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Hi Hazel Shirley,
I read your poem 'YOUR SMILE KEEPS ME ALIVE'. It is an excellent poem with good formation and theme. I like it very much.
V.K.Kanniappan
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wow
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i like uniqueness / innovation
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very nice
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