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water and fire

I'm walking through, I am sumerged in water mixed with fire
one flows right into me then the other comes out
and I ask: What am I to be use like this? and,
Who am I to be called the servant, brother and son of the only true God?
what is this priviledge that I feel, and this honoring that I am giving
it is terrorizing, the awe that my selfish knees are feeling
and with them my impure hands and ego forehead are falling
as my perverse heart believes and declares: The Lord HE IS RISEN 
why this trembling feels so peaceful? the water its still flowing in
the fire its still coming out, could this be the feeling of salvation
the feeling that I'm entering the 3rd heaven.
what an amazing entrance, what an amazing welcoming home 
this journey is just beginning, the water will not stop flowing
the fire will not stop burning. 
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Poetry.com 4 out of 5 based on 3 votes.
Harry Tamonte More than 1 year ago
Very strong and deep, very different from my way of writing.
Ashutosh Yadav More than 1 year ago
great
Shakil Ahmed Baliyavi More than 1 year ago
NICE POEM.
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