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Thrilling Prize

 


 
Now I say you are a thrill,
Something beyond this prosaic deal,
A vibrant commotion swinging swung,
No form of concrete , a vacant hang
Now I say you are a miracle device,
Suspense evocation heart’s prize ,
Feeling’s gate-way nectar rise
Tingling fountain of immortal dyes .
Now , lost in admiration ,I say you are mine ,
With your death I die , and with your rise I shine .
Hooked in your wings,
My being lay paralyzed,
My volcano’s rapture,
Gets creamed in ice.
You are my prize,
You are my prize,
You are my prize.
The blended light of sun, moon, and star,
Symphony sung , in muses’ tongue,
Beyond of these lights and rhythmic bar,
Now I say you are a thrill,
Something beyond this prosaic deal.
 
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Jennifer Rodriguez More than 1 year ago
good writing. nice way to explain love
David Smalling More than 1 year ago
A celebratory ode of conquest ... well done
Shakil Ahmed Baliyavi More than 1 year ago
very aggressive way of expressing love, but good style, i like it, keep on writing.
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