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A Dream Come True

I felt as though I had been stabbed with a knife.
There was so much pain in my life.
I was down and at the end of my rope.
You came along and gave me hope.
In my dreams I saw a man who would love only me.
I was starting to believe this would never be.
Then one day out of no where you came along.
You made me feel like the words from a song.
It happened on that very first night.
You showed me there was a tunnel full of light.
My love for you is unconditional and true.
With you I know I will never be blue.
I am trusting you completely with my heart.
I know that you would never do anything to tear it apart.
I love it when you hold me in your arms so tight.
It is amazing waking up next to you in the morning light.
Happiness is what I want us to have together.
My heart tells me that we could last forever.
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Misty Gordon More than 1 year ago
I wrote this poem for my current husband! I love him with all my heart and don't think I have ever been happier in my life!
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Anna Robuccio More than 1 year ago
Keep Writing!
john palumbo More than 1 year ago
very nice job
Misty Gordon More than 1 year ago
thank you.
Wilma McIvor More than 1 year ago
A great poem of hope inb love.
Wesley Warren More than 1 year ago
Enjoyed the rhyme scheme, made it flow a lot better in my opinion. Good combination of similies and metaphors. The only thing I could offer is to try and shorten the number of syllables per line, the flow is good, until you come across a line that was nearly double the length, in syllables, as the previous one. I do not know your style of writing, wouldn't say it's bad either, you have a nice way of expressing emotions through your writing. Give my idea a try, if you do not write like that now. Great job on the poem!
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