The Hidden
by
Lucy Miller
Wanting to go away
An never to be found
I feel down
As I walk to the bathroom
All that I wanted to do is hide
I turn on the shower
Hope that the water would
Wash away my sins
I want to forget about my past
I don’t want to remember
I want it to be gone from my life
Help me…Please…anyone…
An never to be found
I feel down
As I walk to the bathroom
All that I wanted to do is hide
I turn on the shower
Hope that the water would
Wash away my sins
I want to forget about my past
I don’t want to remember
I want it to be gone from my life
Help me…Please…anyone…
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Poetry.com 2.7 out of 5 based on 3 votes.
Profound look at past memories that shouldn't be looked at again..
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just not poetry without rhyme or meter
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The author mixed past and present tense in the poem which made it seem incomplete and unedited. Next time check for typos and other grammatical errors that, when corrected, make the poem in its entirety flow better.
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