Teen Rebellion (against sin)
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This is not my home, I am a bypasser.
When the world says left, i go right because the way of the world leads to the red lights of burning sulfur.
I am a rebel. No peers will pressure me. No speed humps will deter me.
I speed out of control DUI of the spirit within me and Though my cause is misconstrued by men, my effort and reward are at par in Him.
Am at war with the world, the battlefield is my mind. Power of will is my weapon. Resistance is my force and God is my strength.
I am a rebel. I am a teen. And the vow i take is to fight sin
for as long as i travel this foreign land.
When the world says left, i go right because the way of the world leads to the red lights of burning sulfur.
I am a rebel. No peers will pressure me. No speed humps will deter me.
I speed out of control DUI of the spirit within me and Though my cause is misconstrued by men, my effort and reward are at par in Him.
Am at war with the world, the battlefield is my mind. Power of will is my weapon. Resistance is my force and God is my strength.
I am a rebel. I am a teen. And the vow i take is to fight sin
for as long as i travel this foreign land.
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Poetry.com 4 out of 5 based on 51 votes.
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DAMN BOY YOU GOOD
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Very insiteful. Keep up the battle. I hope you don't mind that I share this on FB. It is very inspiring.
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my favorite poem so far, this gives me strenght and reassures me not to fall to peer pressure, i needed to read this thankyou your words are a blessing to so many!
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Yes God is our strength
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Certainly, It is a cool poem, I love it because of its expression of individuality and the spirit to be at variance with the majority, if not the whole world. A man has a legitimate cause to be different from the rest, though this is oft misconstrued my the world. Though may be deficient in some poetic aspects, I identify with the powerful and sensual message it exhumes. I like the following lines and would like to edit them as such:
Am at war with the world;
The battlefield is my mind;
Power of will is my weapon;
Resistance is my force;
And God is my strength.
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Keep fighting the good fight!!
Great flow and depth
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This is a quest!...follow that star!
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Energizing, inspiring! Great way to express... LOved it!
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Very well said. This has much meaning
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Excellent metaphors to describe your dedication. we pray your mind wins the war.
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INTENSE WRITING..
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This is the first poem that has stood out to me so much. It is touching and its so much of how I feel as a teen in a world of sin.
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What a wonderful poem! I remember how hard it is to be a teen. Ouch! Stay with your faith! Keep writing. You never know who you will inspire. :) God Bless!
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Already winning the fight with God on your side!
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this is a very great poem including the fact its very meaningful
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keep on writing
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well put. dont let them change you
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I love your expression.
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So true...I love this
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Keep up the good work
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'snaps fingers'
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It's a very inspirational well thought out poem poem for our youth today.
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very nice!!!
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favorite line
i am a rebel...a teen...to fight sin
great work on this
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A teens perspective lovely that you want to be on the right path
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