All Mine.
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If I had the chance
to say the things
I'd really like to say,
It would probably take
a week or two,
but maybe just a day.
If I had the chance
to do the things,
I'd really like to do
I know it would take a lifetime,
Maybe even two.
So I'll just live
one day at a time,
In hopes someday
of making you mine.
All Mine!
to say the things
I'd really like to say,
It would probably take
a week or two,
but maybe just a day.
If I had the chance
to do the things,
I'd really like to do
I know it would take a lifetime,
Maybe even two.
So I'll just live
one day at a time,
In hopes someday
of making you mine.
All Mine!
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Just a thought for anyone who has ever chased and then landed the love of their life.
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Poetry.com 4.5 out of 5 based on 16 votes.
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Sounds like he is dedicated to waiting for her til she is a part of his life. Very nice
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well done
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I like it
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This is a classic in my book!
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You covered an entire wish list.
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Another Great poem, - :)
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I love it !!
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thanks for sharing i really enjoyed ths poem
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I love it !!!
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Wow.....really nice Edward. Great write :)
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I'm content all day
to write your love poems,
just tell me...where and when
to send them?
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The second stanza rocks
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one way love Bummer
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Good flow. It's a very cute and thoughtful poem.
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nicely shown the perplex in mind to say some thing
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