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Cheesy Love Poem

Will you still love me in the morning
when my hair is frizzy and my face is make-up free?
Will you still hold my hand tomorrow
in front of everybody so they can see?
Will you still kiss me two years from now
when your life doesn't look as good as it should?
And will you still come to me when you're down?
Just to see me smile, will you say that you would?
Will you look at me the same
whenever I fail?
And when I can't take it anymore,
will you still hold me?
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Poetry.com 4.4 out of 5 based on 13 votes.
Tomy Hindley More than 1 year ago
is always there, morning noon and night........ well written
Juliette Aurora More than 1 year ago
thanks Tomy:)
Supratik Sen More than 1 year ago
But I can't tell you how much I enjoyed reading it!!!! Your expressions are perfect and measured. Humor is also coming out so nicely from this poem!!! Please keep writing.
Juliette Aurora More than 1 year ago
lol Thanks Supratik! I have been told that my love stories are also cheesy. lol
Richard Stephan More than 1 year ago
A beckoning for the loved one to love you in your soul's essence, regardless of the outer form of appearance of beauty on the beast......it's all good, don't worry, be happy! Good one Juliette! ;-) Rico
Juliette Aurora More than 1 year ago
thanks Richard:)
A_Poets_ Heart1229 More than 1 year ago
nice job!
Juliette Aurora More than 1 year ago
thanks:)
Travis Mattern More than 1 year ago
Very Nice! There is nothing "cheesy" about your poem.
Juliette Aurora More than 1 year ago
lol thanks for the compliment Travis:)
mayshore clone More than 1 year ago
WOW! Girl that was amazing I truly loved it you are great in writing poems just by reading this one....
Juliette Aurora More than 1 year ago
thanks Mayshore! That means alot:)
Lydia Trail More than 1 year ago
Keep it up!
Juliette Aurora More than 1 year ago
thanks Lydia:)
samantha cheshire More than 1 year ago
This portrays what I expect most woman question and get anxious about.
Juliette Aurora More than 1 year ago
Yes! Thank you, Samantha
John Boom More than 1 year ago
If you don't love me at my worst, you don't deserve me at my best. The poem is simple, but heartfelt. It is nice and the questions are valid. You go!
Juliette Aurora More than 1 year ago
Thanks John! :)
Mark William Scott More than 1 year ago
great job on this poem
Juliette Aurora More than 1 year ago
thanks Mark!
ex poet More than 1 year ago
emotional worry, but why not? sure will God will
Juliette Aurora More than 1 year ago
Thanks Ex Poet:)
Kanniappan Kanniappan More than 1 year ago
Sure
Juliette Aurora More than 1 year ago
thanks Kanniappan!
Semantic D'Moi More than 1 year ago
It is as the name suggests. It has great promise though.
Juliette Aurora More than 1 year ago
thanks:)
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